Old fashioned
by kiwiness

Comment by robbieh:
I like this... lots of things to keep the eyes busy. Nice tones, good exposure.

No customers!
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Comment by DougPaz:
Nice rythmic shot, I fell like I'm missing something on the left though.

Cathedral bridge
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Comment by alanfreed:
A beautiful shot of a part of the world I'd love to visit! I guess my only nitpick would be that I've seen this from the same vantage point many times before. It would have been interesting to see it from a new angle, aside from what we're used to seeing. I actually have a post card hanging on my refrigerator as we speak that looks just like this. The shot is very well done, but it's just a bit cliche for this particular bridge.

Cathedral bridge
by kiwiness

Comment by David Ey:
great job on a truly beautiful scene. Nite time setting with starburst lights and the orange glow......WOW

Sitting Six
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Comment by HBunch:
That's a whole lot of orange. Defianately a natural number. Good find. The color is nice, maybe just a little TOO orange for my personal taste, but still well done. focus and clarity are good. nice detail in the chell and the gravels. the angle and framing/cropping look nice as well. and the border compliments this very nicely. good shot. good luck in the challenge.

Sitting Six
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Comment by Silver Fox:
nice shot, nice colors

Naked eggs (raw eggs disolved in vinegar)
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Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
I think the composition of this is very strong in part to your arrangement of the shells and "remains." You have managed to build a triangle which fills the frame nicely, but doesn't leave it looking overly crowded. Also, the eyes are drawn to the center of the composition, but it is not overly busy, and not static, either.

TECHNIQUE
Great focus and lighting. My only teeny-weeny nitpick is the shadow in the egg shell on the right. Since there are no noticeable shadows elsewhere, this one stands out ot me. Great clarity.

OVERALL EFFECT
Hmmm, I will have to store this idea away for future science projects. Is the resulting membrane delicate? It looks kinda like wood or something. Good work, and it is well done. I'm surprised that it didn't score higher (but only partially because I know how unpredictable the voters are sometimes! :P)

Best wishes in future challenges.
karmat

Cathedral bridge
by kiwiness

Comment by DennisF:
Highway to Heaven? Good shot. A little crooked - the border helped me see that.

Cathedral bridge
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Comment by clicker:
Wow, what a contrast in colors! Beautiful work! Composition is excellent!
Good luck and congratulations on a beauty! -Clicker-

Sitting Six
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Comment by Anastasia:
Great idea with the orange sand! Great macro!