Night Baseballby
mpreslarComment by theSaj: ::: Critique Club ::: [The Saj]
First Impressions: Very nice skyline composition
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Composition: Great capture of the skyline. The building on the left is a bit of a distraction. Too flat in a photo of lots of subjects. Also, there is too little of the field. This becomes a distracting element that keeps gnawing on me.
Subject: I would have expanded the view of the baseball field. There is so little as to make it irrelevant, but since it is so prominent it becomes mentally distracting.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): Colors are nice. Sky tones and reflections especially. Good contrast. I'd say the shot is overall a bit too dark though.
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To improve?: Try to brighten, perhaps dodge/bur a little. Expand the view a bit.
Summary: A rather unusual and interesting skyline shot with an added touch with the baseball game. Enjoyable. Well done but with room for improvement.
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- Jason "The Saj"
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