Confined
by breadfan35

Comment by Kavey:
Heh, love that textured glass. I like the effect the glass has on the shape and colours behind.

#2
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Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: I like the centered comp. Not too fond of the extra space around him.

Lighting/Exposure: Spot on.

Pose: You have a little head tilt here, which is good. I don't like that the shoulders are rounded.

Suggestions for Improvements: With a headshot like this, I would have him hook one of his thumbs into a beltloop or put one hand on a hip to make his shoulders come more alive. I would also crop out some of the unnecessary space around him top and bottom.

He looks so much like a cowboy that has seen too many cattle get away. This is a lovely representation.

#3
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Comment by Jutilda:
Great lighting~~

#1
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Comment by Jutilda:
Great lighting and focus.

#1
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Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: Good job placing the eyes at the top of the frame.

Lighting/Exposure: I am loving the way the light falls off into shadow that isn't quite shadow. Retention of details is wonderful.

Pose: Very nice head tilt :)

Suggestions for Improvements: I am lamenting the loss of half your right ear. :)

Very nice first portrait. You command the lighting well. I look forward to seeing more.

#1
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Comment by onesaint:
texture and the eyes are amazing. Id love a discription of that beauty dish. I might like to see a bit more light on the left (viewer) side.

#3
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Comment by photokariangel:
you look tired but filled with infinate wisdom of yore. love the lighting, and the background gives it a homey feel.

Confined
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Comment by renjith_varma:
A very nice shot. My only nit is about the expression on the model's face. It would be nicer if it was a bit more sad. I hope this will ribbon. 9

#1
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Comment by stupidcat:
wow, what detail! This is very nice. The lighting is great and the shadows really work. The lighting is fantastic.

#2
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Comment by stupidcat:
Hitchcock in a cowboy hat! I love this photo. Black and white (my favorite) and the character in the face is incredible. Lighting is perfect.