Yellow patterns
by erikjohndale

Comment by kate12303:
I would have like a little more of a cleaner photo. It seems sort of blurry or grainy to me.

Yellow patterns
by erikjohndale

Comment by blick:
nice composition. the zig-zag line work in the boats move the eye nicely through the photo!

Yellow patterns
by erikjohndale

Comment by PaulMdx:
Composition: Excellent choice of shape. The number of boats you have included seems to confuse the picture. I think I might prefer it slightly more open (not quite sure how).
Technical: Colours and lack of border are good. I guess the shot was hand-held making deep DOF difficult, but I think crisper focus would have benefited the end result.
Meets challenge: Holiday photo?
Overall impression: Good idea but let down slightly by aesthetics for me personally. 6