... A little over the shoulder!
by jah_luv

Comment by JeffryZ:
Over sharpened image,

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by Judi:
Good angle and colours.

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by Revecca:
focus..

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by lifternessjt:
The composition is off. The top right and left corners in yellow are out of place.

... A little over the shoulder!
by jah_luv

Comment by Tygerr:
Not very well executed. An actual shoulder in the photo might have given it more life. There was an entry using this superstition in the last Superstions challenge that placed in the top 5. Have a look at that one to see how effective it could have been.
As for your choice, you could have cropped closer - those top corners are very distracting. Also, the focus doesn't seem quite spot on. And there are some compression artifacts in the image. Maybe you didn't resize it properly? Or maybe the resolution of the camera was too low.

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by c3real:
Very out of focus and the collors are not tuned up

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by Nuzzer:
It looks like you may have oversharpened a bit much?

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Comment by Lena:
Nice idea, but I'd prefer to see the salt in better definition - since there is very little to look at in the picture, what there is needs to be attention-grabbing. Unfortunately the salt looks like a white blob mostly, with grainy bits around the edges.

... A little over the shoulder!
by jah_luv

Comment by margiemu:
the yellow edges on the table don't really add anything compositionally. I think this would look better if you cropped them out.

... A little over the shoulder!
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Comment by mognoy:
Too bad the picture is really too much compressed. It ruins the composition. 5