Tool
by WillSnaps

Comment by ananddp:
wow... looks like a bull..

Tool
by WillSnaps

Comment by btrfly:
beautiful lighting.

Summoning the Rain
by WillSnaps

Comment by alyami:
to much HDR

not soo real

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Pretty crisp, but opening up that aperture a bit might have helped sharpen it up more. I do like the idea and I like what you came up with.

Lighting: It also looks like the lighting was too harsh, thus washing things out a bit. Opening up that aperture and toning down the lighting would have made a nice difference. The brightness of the lips and the shadows inside the mouth are a bit distracting.

Composition/Content: Great idea. You did a very nice job meeting the challenge in a very creative manner. Perhaps replacing the pink straw with a bright blue one would have added some nice color contrast, as well as give the eye more of an opportunity to flow around the image.

My Opinion: Nice work, and a fine score that followed. With some slight adjustments in your lighting and just a little more color, you would have been well into the 6 range.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by aerogurl:
great concept and executed well.. however the skin is not right to me.. the color is off.. i know its not the WB because the milk is nice and white, so maybe oversaturation? still a great shot. 6

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by zardoz:
A fun and sexy image. A great setup and composition. My biggest criticism is that the lighting seems a little flat. I think the milkshake needs a little more contrast and the models chest a little darker. That would help the image pop out more I think.

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by miadrago:
good idea, but the model's skin color seems a little "off"

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by jsc9306:
no picture

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by corinne:
Sexy and innocent all in one. Red lips and milk. Nice try.

Ahhh Bubbles
by WillSnaps

Comment by DefyTime:
Maybe a little too much flash on the lips...really like the photo and the idea...nice work...7