Where's My Coloring Books???
by Chuckie

Comment by the general:
there seems to be a lot of noise in this picture but still good nonetheless

Where's My Coloring Books???
by Chuckie

Comment by wewillexplore:
I don't like the grainy feel, but nice idea.

A 'Key' Advancement
by Chuckie

Comment by inspzil:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Actually a very interesting photo. I like the way you compared the old finger buster to the newly improved electic typewriter. The photo is grainy and not the clearest. You know, honestly I think I like it this way as a real throwback to something you'd see in life magazine in the late 60s when "Kodachrome" was becoming really popular. The colors are really good and very reminiscent of the era (although I'm not that old). I personally think it is well done (if your intentions were to make it look old).

Technical - This all has to do with the intentions part. If it was not supposed to be clear, then I think its slightly out of focus. If it was not supposed to be grainy, then I think the ISO was too high and you could have used a lower ISO and more light. DOF is good and the framing is really wonderful.

Overall - I think this is a great throwback photo to days of yore when the electric typewriter was the thing that was going to keep 50,000 secretaries from battling carpal tunnel syndrome. I think this photo is really underrated. Maybe I'm one of the few who understand it? Well done. At least if no one else thinks so, I'll go on the record and say I like it. Good job. - Inspzil

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by inspzil:
This needs to be turned slightly clockwise to be symmetrical. I'm not sure where the focus is but the whole pic is a little muddy

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by Lustre:
I'm sure others will say the same, but... I find the angle annoying. I think you should have rotated the image so that the vents, and other framework, were horizontal. Besides that I like what you did with the colouring of this image.

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by Compaq:
great job

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by Dustin:
good

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by Becky:
I like the texture of this photo.

Vents
by Chuckie

Comment by 'Pong:
The inversion helps but still doesn't work.

A 'Key' Advancement
by Chuckie

Comment by sherryk471:
Does nothing here