Fall Flower
by Citadel

Comment by franyoung2002:
I think the yellow flower should be in even better focus.

Downtown Train
by Citadel

Comment by GuGi:
the tree in the foreground is crowding the rest of the shot, some cropping would have helped imo
I like your idea though, a lot

Downtown Train
by Citadel

Comment by paulb_17:
Hey a fellow Calgarian, I'd recognize the C-train anywhere. Nice shot, the tree in the foreground would have been a whole lot better with autumn leaves on it, but that's out of your hands right?

Morning Commute
by Citadel

Comment by Citadel:
Well...my second challenge submission and the results were almost a whole point better than the first one. I took this on the way to work so I sadly didn't have my tripod. I think the idea itself was a good one but there was a lot of room for improvement.

Thanks again for everyone's comment and to everyone who took the time to vote.

C

Downtown Train
by Citadel

Comment by dv_rock:
Tree in a bad spot...

Morning Commute
by Citadel

Comment by love:
love the blur and color 9

Reach
by Citadel

Comment by Citadel:
Thank you all for your reply. I really appreciate the honest feedback that I received for this entry. In retrospect, I should have submitted my Ducky picture but this entry helped me learn so much about this community. Other sites pretty much just say "Nice" and "Good shot" etc without any detailed comments. I also appreciate that the ratings are hard to come by. (I.e. If you get a 10 it is quite significant).

Thanks again to all who took the time to vote and comment.

C

Reach
by Citadel

Comment by CaliKat07:
Blurry at the bottom. I think for a subject such as this, color may have been better.

Morning Commute
by Citadel

Comment by lauraodom:
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 1
Composition - 1
Overall Impression - 1
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 5

Morning Commute
by Citadel

Comment by skylen:
Nice sense of motion, but there are severe JPEG artifacts that ruin the image... a higher quality setting would help a lot.