FudgeHeartby
GoldtrapComment by tcherring: CRITIQUE CLUB
First of all, for your fist submission, I just have to say THANKS for submitting. Don't give up based on the comments here.
1. Backdrop- this looks like it was taken on a standard counter top or carpet?? Going with a flat black backdrop or white would have brought more emphasis to the subject.
2. Flash - Did you use the on-camera flash? See how it reflects on the bottom of the plate and causes a "circle" around the flash center? Honestly, if you don't have stand-alone flashes or a hot-shoe, try to compensate with your lighting. Beleive it or not, just moving this outside would have given you natural, beautiful lighting.
3. Lighting - You don't have to own professional studio lights to get better lighting. GE has "true color" bulbs out now that have a blue tint. They are the same cost as standard bulbs, but create a true light (not yellow, like in your photo). You can simply put it in a "snake" light and adjust the lighting on your subject. Obviously, this is low end, but it's a start for practice. Natural lighting also gives great results. Just take the item outside when the sun is high (but watch for shadows)
4. Blurry - you can correct this by sharpening your image after you resize it.
5. Cropping - cropping is allowed here, and you might want to zero in next time.
OVERALL - THANKS for submitting and take all comments with a grain of salt. Use the suggestions above and you will get a higher result next time! Take care!
