Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by boyd2000:
Good idea, but not executed very precisely

Architectural Symmetry
by dcanossa

Comment by dcanossa:
Hello Tim,

Thanks for the critique. This is what I'm here for, to learn!! :) I have never taken any photography course and I am pretty new to all this, but reading comments always help!

Thank you again,
Greetings
Diego

Originally posted by timfythetoo: Greetinsg from the Critique Club - First off congrats on a new personal best. Thats always a good thing. Yo rimag ehere definitely meets the challenge. Easily symmetrical. But its technically and artistically missing some things. The image is a bit soft in focus. Would have been nice to havethe details really be sharp. The colors and contrast are also a bit flat. This may have worked well as a b&w or sepia toned image. AS it is though its a bit boring. The composition as well is a bit flat. It doesnt have a lot of impact or interest holding power to it tat would have garnered it a higher score in voting. Study some of the higher scoring images here and read the threads. This place is a treasure trove of info and you cant help but learn from it. Keep shooting and good luck in future challenges! Tim

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by Shadowi6:
A tough crowd to stand out in with waving a light source. I like the symbolisim in yours Good Luck

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by bassbone:
this image is a little too blown out - i like the symbol and the title

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by johnmcboston:
zzzzzz

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by weegi70:
Peace out dude!, but with honesty... it may have been better if you pointed the light emmitting device just below the lense, to help eliminate the hase...

thats my opinion.

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice and simple - Maybe a tad too simple.

Give Peace a Chance
by dcanossa

Comment by hook:
nice idea nut could have done with more colour and more focus

Architectural Symmetry
by dcanossa

Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetinsg from the Critique Club -

First off congrats on a new personal best. Thats always a good thing.

Yo rimag ehere definitely meets the challenge. Easily symmetrical. But its technically and artistically missing some things. The image is a bit soft in focus. Would have been nice to havethe details really be sharp. The colors and contrast are also a bit flat. This may have worked well as a b&w or sepia toned image. AS it is though its a bit boring.

The composition as well is a bit flat. It doesnt have a lot of impact or interest holding power to it tat would have garnered it a higher score in voting. Study some of the higher scoring images here and read the threads. This place is a treasure trove of info and you cant help but learn from it. Keep shooting and good luck in future challenges!

Tim

Architectural Symmetry
by dcanossa

Comment by corinne:
Nice choice of subject matter. Looks a littl washed out alongside the lower third of the window, but that not have been avoided. I like this one a lot.