Spicing things upby
tyrkinnComment by Prime_Time: *Howdy from the Critique Club*
First of all, when I looked at it gave me a smile and as my eyes start to move around. The relationship between the picture and the couch are out and a little distracting.
Also if you would have moved your subjects over to your left about 6 inches this would have put his head in the red area and hers in the white. Because the green in the painting is around his head making it look strange. I know you did allot of set up for this shot, but you could always change the background to something else. Just my opinion.
His glasses seem smudged a bit I don't know if this was intentional or not. But I do know the voters see everything here.
Your lighting seems to be dead on, nothing to bright or dark.
You might also keep up your file size close to the 150K limit, so you don't loose any more detail than possible.
Over your photo has a nice funny story to it, I think you have fine image and keep up the good work. If you have any question feel free to ask.
Have a Great Day, Mark Thomas Kelsay
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