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| 05/12/2003 05:37:46 PM |
TRICOLORby mikemtiComment by KimInNB: This is my favorite photo in the challenge!! You have beautifully captured the flower and it is nicely contrasted against the blue sky with the wonderful fluffy clouds. I love the perspective, the composition, the color -- everything!!!!! |
| 05/12/2003 05:32:25 PM |
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| 05/03/2003 02:56:10 PM |
Still Aliveby mikemtiComment by mbardeen: Greets from the Critique Club!
Hi Mike,
This subject could have been much better presented, in my opinion. The lighting is great and really shows off the details in the flowers, however that gets lost in all the stuff going on around the flowers. The surrounding branches get lost in the table, the table pulls the viewer away from the flowers, and the green just adds confusion.
DrJones, who critiqued one of my worst shots, gave me some really good advice - the simpler the subject, the more tempting it is to overload it with surrounding details. Keep it simple. Rather than laying the flowers out on the table, lay them out on a piece of cloth. Get in real close to them so the viewer can see the detail.
Just one or two changes and this would have an outstanding picture, as it is now it's consigned to snapshot status.
Good luck in the next challenge!
-Matt |
| 04/26/2003 09:19:46 AM |
Still Aliveby mikemtiComment by lisae: I think the composition of the background elements distracts from the roses. There are a lot of strong lines leading the eyes away from them. Maybe a tighter crop would have been better. |
| 04/25/2003 07:49:23 AM |
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| 04/22/2003 08:37:46 AM |
Still Aliveby mikemtiComment by CLarson557: I think this would have been more effective had you been able to get in closer to your subject...the dried roses. Do you have a maco setting on your camera? I would take advantage of it, if you do. I do like the lawn chair used as a background. It might detract from the white baby's breath, but it makes for an interesting pattern. Although, the yard looks well taken care of and well manicured, I think the green color really distracts from the photo. Too contrasting. Otherwise, the picture seems to be well focused and shows good detail of the wilted rose bouqet. |
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