Flame grilled Pi
by bmw

Comment by KaDi:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Welcome to DPC! I see that this is your first entry in a challenge...that's the hardest part, entering for the first time.

The image fits the challenge and the title adds a bit of humor and dimension. I like the way you played with light-writing to create the subject...it really feels like Pi has been branded on the wood wall.

Unfortunately the focus feels soft and since your aperature was small enough to create a large depth of field I can only guess that either the camera support shook during the exposure or something else mysterious happened to create the blur.

A square crop might have helped to emphasize the circle in your composition since the black areas at top and bottom don't add to the story.

Overall, a fine first photo to enter! Don't let the scores discourage you...DPC voters are harsh critics and a "6" is considered fairly awesome here.

Keep shooting!
--Kadi

Flame grilled Pi
by bmw

Comment by lillyspad75:
this would have been awesome if it where just a little sharper...still good though

Flame grilled Pi
by bmw

Comment by boyd2000:
Apparently a time lapse photo with a penlight but it looks much like glowing electrical elements. Good job.

Flame grilled Pi
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Comment by jgrieco:
good effort. focus seem off a bit

Flame grilled Pi
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Comment by JeffDay:
I have seen this process alot on this site, really like what you have done with it

Flame grilled Pi
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Comment by steez6:
just like mama makes

Flame grilled Pi
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Comment by Dancing620queen:
i like the idea,the colors are really cool!

Flame grilled Pi
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Comment by jsc9306:
nice