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| 04/16/2008 03:41:49 PM |
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| 04/16/2008 02:19:29 PM |
Bubble Troubleby JulietNNComment by JH: I didn't vote on this challenge - but here's a bit of up-front technical critique as you requested in the forums :)
- Composition: The shape looks too 'long' and the face is too small in the center. A squarer frame cropped closer to the face might've worked better. Also, the space at the top and bottom draws my eye to the weird vignetting effect in the corners.
- Colour/Contrast: His face looks too orange. The bubbles appear blown out with no real texture visible. Contrast is a bit high as well, giving his skin a blotchy look.
- Focus: Face is too small in the frame, but it gives the impression his eyes aren't in sharpest focus.
I'm reminded of a shot by Judi, which I'll post here for reference;
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| 04/16/2008 12:55:06 PM |
Bubble Troubleby JulietNNComment by ltlmschrisss: I didn't vote on this one, but it would have probably been a 4 or 5 from me. The head could be straight but even with that it would still look freeky. (although I must say Charlie is a cutie :).. ) Way too much negative space for me and it does seem blown out. It takes a while to get that it is bubbles. So I would have really liked this if you had gotten a little more up close and personal with some softer lighting, and maybe a conversion to black and white. jmo |
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| 04/16/2008 12:49:29 PM |
Bubble Troubleby JulietNNComment by pineapple: I voted a 6. But for me I did not feel comfortable with the redishness of the face or the expanse of the foam. I think I might have preferred a slightly desaturated image which was cropped much more closely to the subject's face. Perhaps even in a rich monochrome or duotone. Not that I know anything about nothing, of course. ;-) |
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