1890s relics
by jnenvir

Comment by Beryl:
Nice - a Tiffany?

1890s relics
by jnenvir

Comment by bvy:
Compositionally, it's a bit busy (the wall/ceiling is distracting) and it looks like a color balance adjustment might have cured the yellow cast. Of course it is a Light Bulb challenge, so maybe that's the effect you were after. In that case, a tighter crop might have helped.

Matching boxes
by jnenvir

Comment by kellyo:
Nice concept, but maybe you could have found a more exciting color or lighting.

1890s relics
by jnenvir

Comment by Molly:
Very snap-shot-ish.. fits the challenge though. Hey.. change that bulb ;P 5

Dog agility team in step
by jnenvir

Comment by Patsfan:
A little out of focus.

Dog agility team in step
by jnenvir

Comment by Kwilson10:
this was a good idea, but it is really fuzzy and the background is a lttle off

Dog agility team in step
by jnenvir

Comment by hotpasta:
It's out of focus unfortunately

USS Recruit -- fastest ship in the navy -- an historical site as well
by jnenvir

Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

Well you almost nailed the brown. I wont make this long as it looks like I will just be repeating most of what your other comments state.

You met the challenge for sure, but the technical issues really over power that. The blurry issue is just a really strong problem. Odds are this was handheld with a long shutter speed (long for hand held) and that ends up being all I think about when looking at the shot.

I do think you have a cool "model" here though. A wide angle lens (or standing further back) to allow the whole boat to be in the shot, and shooting on a tripod to allow a sharper shot would have served you much better here.

Tim

Dog agility team in step
by jnenvir

Comment by TeeCeeJay:
I can see what you were trying to acheive here but to really pull it off your focus needs to be pin sharp. Well done on freezing the movement though.

Dog agility team in step
by jnenvir

Comment by kellyo:
Dog is blurry.