Shakespeare in the Park
by jnenvir

Comment by albc28:
Just a little to blurry. I see shakespeare in the background and really there is no park (not taken into account for voting). Around the guys face there is an area of white that makes it seem as if you blurred the background separate from the guy...either way it makes the photo look slightly flawed. I think the composition could have been a little bit better and maybe better lighting.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Needs a little more contrast for impact. Maybe a little too tall and stretched out.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by FireBird:
I like the long leading lines and the repeating ellipses along the diagonal.
Might be nicer cropped down a bit on the top and just a little on the left. This would simplify the image and make it stronger in my opinion. Still very nice.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by Frankie_Lv:
Nice image. There seems to be some dust or something on your lense or filter bottom right.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by Nathanael_G:
Excellent composition and lighting! 10.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by sanschag:
Very nice, however, I think it would have been better cropped in from the left. As it is, I'm not fond of the large expanse of white. (I haven't decided if I like the lack of detail in the white or not as it makes the image very graphical as it is.)

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by paynekj:
I feel you might have been better cropping off a little of the empty space

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by dafletchr:
Great angle. Very contemporary feeling. I would have cropped out the top background bit to where the walkway starts to curve for a total geometric/abstract feeling to this. Then I would have pumped the contrast up a notch. But that's me. Really like it though.

Mission Bay
by jnenvir

Comment by DistantColours:
A tighter crop would improve this a great deal - remove the top of the fence and the fence on the left completely so we're just left with the main fence and shadows.