Gone with the Wind
by FallenAngel360

Comment by steve100:
Meets Challenge 3 Impact 3 Technicals 3 Processing 3 Creativity 3 Total (weighted) 3 Sorry but in my opinion this does not meet the challenge.

Gone with the Wind
by FallenAngel360

Comment by Luci11e:
I can see where your going with this; but I don't think it's quite there just yet. For me this is more about bokeh than macro.

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the silhouette is nicely contrasted with the sky.

Technically this is a good silhouette shot but as one commenter noted it has been resized too much. The main tower also appears to be off vertical slightly.

Artistically This is good as it intends to showcase the lines of the building rather than the building itself.

In summary it's an ok shot but compressed too much and also lacks a bit of punch - but that's really the sky and mother natures fault rather than yours ;)

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Oooooh!

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
This is obviously from someone who has never gotten one of my infamous JPEG comments before. So, here you go...

There are a ton of compression artifacts showing around the edges of the tower. A 39k file size confirms excessive compression is what is killing the detail and clarity in this shot. Compression kills detail. Always use the least amount of compression you can get away with and still come in under the challenge limit.

Other than that it is a dramatic looking shot and I'm sure it will do decently.

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by LonnieD:
Lot of negative space lower LHS.
Detracts from image IMO.

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by snaffles:
mefnj?

A Delicate Sillhouette
by FallenAngel360

Comment by NikonJeb:
I actually think the marlin statue is detrimental to the image.....6

Everything Changes Over Time
by FallenAngel360

Comment by mindbottling:
The harsh shadow from the flash is distracting to me.

Everything Changes Over Time
by FallenAngel360

Comment by CarlvanHeerden:
The light on the face is good, but the shadow on the backdrop is poor. It gives this a snapshot feel that it does not deserve.