Brothers Grimm: Cinderella
by cup4tml

Comment:
I think you've got some really interesting subject matter in here, and the shot is well composed, but I think the lighting is really hurting this picture. There's a visible light source, but then there's these really harsh shadows which are clearly coming from a spot light off-camera. If you still have this set up available to you, I'd be really interested to see what it'd look like using just the light from the candle and a longer exposure time. I think it might really bring out some of the interesting textures on the typewriter and leather cover which are being lost to shadow or washed out from the harsh light.