Outside the fray
by glad2badad

Comment:
I only wish those two kids who have a sliver of their head in the picture were not in it.

14, 20, and 44 years old.
by mrbig65

Comment:
Hahaha ewww feet, good luck with this one! (No offense just not a foot fan)

Snap -- crackle -- POP !
by RianBotes

Comment:
Congratulations on finally catching the picture you've been hunting! ANd congratulations on the ribbon too!

Basic beauty
by Lutchenko

Comment:
Lutchenko? Either way I love your work!

longing
by ytshuva

Comment:
Very touching photo

The iron giant
by Yo_Spiff

Comment:
Very cool, there's a War of the Worlds feel to this. Plane's position is a great touch!

False Bravado (CW)
by JokersSoul

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Nice entry for this challenge and it looks like the CW tag is working, you got a lot of helpful comments during voting.

The very first thing I noticed is that is face is covered. At least his mouth is showing but if his entire face was visible the picture would have much more emotion and connect to everyone who has been in a situation like this.

I like the mountains in the back. I realize it probably wasn't possible but would have liked the background to be less cluttered, the houses, basketball court and some of the ramps. As someone else suggested a lower angle would help to isolate your subject.

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Senay

Not a box of chocolates
by Melethia

Comment:
Alfred Hitchcock's twin brother?

Chris Tomlin - Hello Love Music CD
by amateurboi

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hmm I thought you might have finished higher than this. I thought you had a rather well lighted subject with a clear idea of what you were selling. Love the way the colours all match. If there was one thing I would change that would be to include all of the CD. You included the most important parts in the picture but it's noticeable that the very bottom is excluded. All the best in future challenges!

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Senay

Cooler by Far
by tehben

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hey tehben! This was similar to an idea I had, I was going to use Labatt's Max Ice and put it surrounded by ice cube chunks. Didn't work out. Anywho this was a great idea. It's just not very exciting though. It's lacking a certain flair. I did give it a 6 though, and all those beer pictures were making me thirsty. It might just be me but I would have liked to see the beer going from bottom left to top right. I find it easier to read in this direction / than in this \. This critique has turned into nonsensical ramblings so I'll stop now. I think overall you have a good average picture. You can tell this also from your votes, you haven't received any votes at either of the extremes with most at 5 and 6. Congratulations on your new third highest rated picture! Look forward to seeing more from you.

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Senay