A Toy From the Past
by rapture

Comment:
I remember that game! I think this could have been an excelent image - but... you really need more light on them and the items in the foreground, midground and background are very distracting. A solid bg and clean fg would make a much nicer image. Also, what's with the drink cup?

You Say You Want a Revolution....
by irishempress

Comment:
Great! Now that song will be in my head for hours! I like how you composed this shot. Bumping contrast a touch would give it that extra zing...

Log/Log
by GeneralE

Comment:
Interesting lighting, interesting composition. Refreshing!

Before Discman & Ipod...
by CrystalFury

Comment:
Hmmm where to begin.... I like the idea here - however - execution... The light is far too bright on the surface of the walkman and causes very dark shadows in the fg. Using fill flash, or a 2nd light source would correct that. Also, the wrinkled cloth gives the image a very rough and thrown together feel. And one last thing, if your going to include the headphones in the shot, I think they should be included completely, not having the wire leave and reenter the image. I hope you find this helpful.

combine
by cm0783

Comment:
This shot looks very washed out and flat due to overexposure. Adjusting contrast could help somewhat, also a less centered composition would be more interesting.

Effete
by striderx77

Comment:
The uneven lighting hurts this shot, as does the busy bg. Propping a white card behind your subject would give this image a much cleaner look.

Backstage Venice
by unicum

Comment:
You shot in harsh light, but handled it well. Lovely image.

Fading into the past.
by Douglas

Comment:
I really like the idea, and you executed it well, my only nit is the lighting (which is uneven and dark) and the carpet is distracting.

Cellular Victim
by rbenny

Comment:
The composition includes so many distracting elements and the main subject (the phone) looks out of focus. I would suggest simplifying the shot to just the telephone and maybe a little space around it on one side or the other for an off-centered composition.

remember cutting and pasting?
by lakritstroll

Comment:
I understand what you were going for here - but I don't think you hit your mark. The items look scattered, not composed , also fewer items would have helped to draw the eye where you want the viewer to go.