IMG_0282A.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
I think this one is almost there...I think the extreme camera tilt is a little to far, maybe if it was tilted the other way. right now it looks like she is leaning up and aginst the tilt and the creates tension, as apose to her leaning with the tilt wouldn't create so much tension. maybe, I might be wrong about that. the big thing that bothers me though is her eyes, and how dark they are, I don't know how you use the lighting here, but if it's all natural just don't have her lean so much into the railing.

there are some major things I do like though. I love the body part of the pose and the arms and the legs make for great line, another reason why I think the tilt doesn't need to be so much. The hands are nice and soft they don't look to posed, the expression on her face really is nice too.

I think you are almost there with this one, but as is it's still a nice image. I would love to hear what the model thinks about it.

IMG_0399A.jpg
by dwterry

Comment:
this is very nice, I really love the expression and the lighting is nice with the background being darker then she is, creating a mood. good job. I think that the loss of detial in her hair may be bothersome in a print, it depends on how flat the black is, and the few blown out sequence may be a problem too. I think overall that is getting very nit-picky and the goods way way outweigh the bads.

great job as always.

daboardergirl
by joeciccone

Comment:
this isn't even close to being in focus

Live. Laugh. Scream for freedom.
by purpleflutterby13

Comment:
I like your idea, and I think your title takes it up a notch, but I think I lose it with the hands, that just seem weird and the lack of light in her eyes. turn her body a little more towards that sunset and things would look a lot better. we have that highlight coming down here arm and across the side of her face but there is no light on her front, it's all on her back

butterfly
by hanneke

Comment:
very nice, I really love this shot. I like the use of the dirt and the out of focus with the subtle color. great job! my first 10 of the challenge.

pilar
by gaston

Comment:
like the idea, but I think this frame was wrong for this shot.

Beat The Heat!
by sudhi

Comment:
I don't know if I like the hallo around his face, and there is something werid about his hand too

American Indian Princess
by toddhead

Comment:
not a big fan of all the square lines. like her shoulders and her neck are all perfectly straight. That then makes the lines of the face straight, ie the mouth the nose the eyes and then it finishes with the stright lines in the hat.

Red Yellow Green
by JustinM

Comment:
there seems to be a focus issue, especially with the yellow one.

Swimming
by TheStick

Comment:
focus issues