senakulo :: old story, reenacted
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
OJ Greatings from your own Critique Club. You didn't have any entry last week, so I am commenting on this one.

Here is what I like about the image.

- Composition
- Expressions

Here some things needs improvement IMO

- Picture is too sharp.
- There are some blown outs on the forehead and the face.
- Most important of all - DNMC (Does not Meet the Challenge). You will see this trend on DPC. You will get low score for DNMC.

Best of luck for your future entries.

Abby
by woohoopepper

Comment:
Nice portrait Wendy. Congrates on your PB. The BG is great. Only thing I don't like is focus is bit soft and the carpet on the bottom.

Message edited by author 2006-05-07 02:09:01.

Crystal Complement
by fotodude

Comment:
Nice colors and composition. If you would have avoided reflection, this would have scored even higer.

Complementary Colors
by MayaM

Comment:
Nice, just wondering if crop with just one bulb and more pf stem could have scored well.

Message edited by author 2006-05-03 23:16:17.

Little Lady
by elsapo

Comment:
Very nice Macro indeed, great DOF. Congrates on your ribbon,

Ignition
by kiwiness

Comment:
Another ribbon, Congrates. I agree with thegrandwazoo, it's definately not "Imagination downfall". Very nice image, perfect for the challenge.

G'day Mate!
by cheegirl

Comment:
Congrates on your Blue. Very nice capture, well deserved win.

daydream
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
Woohoo, Kelly Congratulations on your first ribbon. Well deserved. Too bad you have to leave the team...

Anno 1870
by Anastasia

Comment:
Well deserve Blue. The composition, focus is right on the spot. The color selection is perfect for the challenge.

Doctor Darts
by Transit

Comment:
Nice, but less of the complementary colors. Black color is over powering. I would have used different BG.