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| 07/08/2005 07:11:04 PM |
[ not pleased ]by saurabhsComment: thanks. but it was not completely without permission. :) Message edited by author 2005-07-08 19:12:09. |
| 01/24/2005 01:20:02 AM |
[ legacy of an era gone by... ]by saurabhsComment: I took a bunch of these and preferred this one because of the colors in the background. Did realize that only the composition and framing we decent but then again could resist submitting just for the comments. I guess something like //www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=138406 would be better received (or maybe the completely silhouetted version). Message edited by author 2005-01-24 03:06:31. |
| 01/23/2005 12:16:27 PM |
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| 01/10/2005 08:16:15 PM |
Empty eyesby saurabhsComment: Thanks a lot for the criticism. This has been my first few days on dpchallenge and I was testing the water for what the audience type is like. I guess I will have a less abstract entry for the next contest.
thanks again for your time.
regards
saurabh
Originally posted by BAMartin: Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: This has a nice composition, very balancde. I like how the coils fade into the background.
Colors:Black and white was aa very nice choice for this photo, although I suspect the original was close to black and white.
Lighting: The lighting seems a little harsh in the upper left, where it reflects off of the top of the coil. I like what you did with the contrast, but it may be a little over the edge for most of the voters.
Meeting Challenge: This photo definitely meets the challenge, and its a subject we all see everyday without really looking at it.
Border / Title: Your title maybe the best part of the photograph. I like the comparison to eyes.
Overall: Overall this is a good photograph, but it does not hold my interest for too long as there does not seem to be a very defined subject. My eyes tend to wander over the entire photograph without finding a place to land. |
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