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| 07/20/2005 01:05:44 AM |
Pipeby arsenalComment: Personally, I like you choice of subject matter (old rusty metal parts). I also think you've captured an impressive amount of detail in your subject and really given us a sense of it's 'texture'. I like it. The two issues I have with this pic are 1) Exposure. The top part of the pipe is too underexposed. 2) Background. It's just too bright for my taste. I would have chosen something that provides more contrast to the colours of the pipe. 3) Cropping. I can't really say what I would want, since I don't know what the actual pipe looks like. But maybe you could have shown more of it? But again, I like this pic. |
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| 07/20/2005 01:00:28 AM |
Stonesby nereumComment: Choice of subject matter not bad, but pic suffers terribly from boring lighting. You should choose lighting that reveals the 3-D proberties of your subject better. Plus, the yellow think in the bottom right corner is a distraction. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:57:19 AM |
Silky Smooth H2Oby hyperfocalComment: It's a good pic technically, but I don't think it meets the challenge very well. Plus, shooting waterfalls with long exposures is a bit cliche, especially if that's the main point of your picture. |
| 07/20/2005 12:55:27 AM |
a seaside twistby hkvamComment: Great subject (i'll admit to a weakness for rusty metal) and the photo is almost very good, IMO, except that you DOF is a bit too small. I would have liked to see more of the wire in focus. Also the part that is in focus is too dark. Plus the composition/cropping could be improved. But nice nonetheless. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:50:46 AM |
Dark land by heidaComment: This pic looks really overprocessed and that really puts me off. Too unrealistic for me. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:49:13 AM |
Bumpyby owenComment: You should have cropped out the background. It's just too plain and that shadow is really ugly and distracting. If you had filled your frame with the coloured things you would have gotten a much better picture! |
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| 07/20/2005 12:47:05 AM |
pine, cut and cryingby nikantComment: This is probably not a very helpful comment, but this picture, for me, just doesn't have a 'grab' element. My feeling is that you don't have enough contrast here, or that the pic is overexposed. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:45:37 AM |
Red Onionby danderson107Comment: Overexposure is the main problem here. I'm sure you could bring out more details if you'd decreased the exposure. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:43:58 AM |
Gripby indy79Comment: This is just my personal opinion, but I like 'texture' pics to have both an element of familiarity but at the same time also be a bit disorienting. I'd like to be able to say 'I know what that is' as well as 'I never knew it could look like this'. My main problem with this picture is that I'm just not sure what it's supposed to be a picture of. It looks to me that this could have been entirely computer-generated, although I'm guessing (mainly from the title) that it's a picture of a tire. But I think your technique is good. |
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| 07/20/2005 12:40:30 AM |
My Dealby VivaComment: This pic fails to reveal anything interesting about the texture of these objects (although the choice of subject matter is not bad). 1) The picture is overall soft and is misssing a point to which to viewers attention should be directed. 2) It is overexposed with too many blown highlights. 3) Changing the lighting could have imporved this pic greatly. |
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