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| 06/23/2006 06:24:57 PM | Sail Imagesby DrakeComment: Greetings from the Critique Club
First impression and overall look:
First impression was, nice weather. The photo makes me want to leave my desk and rent a boat for my own. There isn't much more I can say about it though. It's a nice picture of a boat, but it doesn't really hold my attention. It doesn't give the exilaretaing feel of a sailing trip, but more of a few people waiting for something to happen.
Composition wise I feel that having the back of the boat (is that 'aft'?) cropped is not a good idea, and I would have shown a bit more of the sails to give it a les centered appearance. The crew through the front sail that you wanted to capture is a bit lost, because you can't really see what he's doing.
Technical and post processing:
The boat is nice in focus, but you didn't capture the lighting at the best time. You can't really see any of the feces because they are all in shadow. Taking the photo at high noon (as this appears to be) makes the image rather flat.
Meeting the challenge:
Of course there are shadows present (aren't they always), but it's not the focal point of this image. I would even rule a silhouette as technically a shadow, but the guy through the sail is also not exactly in silhouette.
How to raise your score:
A few things. First, make sure that you at least superficially meet the challenge. There are people out there who would score a 1 alone on a DNMC vote.
Second, try to shoot at a different time, as high noon is not the best time of the day. The lighting is harsh, and the lack of shadows makes many an image just flat.
Third, make something happen in your image. These people are just sitting there. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/23/2006 06:06:23 PM | Shadows IIIby duffloopComment: Greetings from the Critique Club:
First impression and overall look:
My first impression of this photo is one of confusion. I had to look a few times before I realised what I saw. This is both a pro and a con, as it makes for an interesting shot that you want to come back to, but a con because the eye does not have anything to rest on. The first thing you look at is the shadow, as that is the dominant part of the image, but the eye tends to drift to the dog because there is more detail to be found there. Then the two parts of the image contend for dominance, making it an uneasy picture.
Technical and post processing:
Technically, this shot is done well. Everything is in focus and the lighting is well distributed. I do think the contrast could be a bit higher, making the shadows a bit darker. I would also crop a bit tighter on the right side, although that is a point of debate. With this crop you have the shadow centered in the image, but the dog looks a bit shoved aside. With a tighter crop, the dog would be centered, but your shadow might be off balance. This is also again because of the two parts of the image that fight for the eye's attention.
Meeting the challenge:
It does. There is definitely a shadow there. :)
How to raise your score:
Having a better balance in composition might help. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/23/2006 05:45:56 PM | Still Life With Bottleby melismaticaComment: Greetings from the Critique Club
First impression and overall look:
My first impression on this photo is that it is very classical, composition wise. You used the rule of thirds well on the vertical axis, and the weight of the image is nicely distributed. There is a good balance between the heavy part on the left, and the quiet part on the right, although I'm not sure if you should have left the bit of wood on the right in.
On the horizontal exis, I feel that the weight of the image is slightly downwards and I think you could have included more of the ground. As it is now, the dark part of the ground is not adding anything to the image and maybe you should have included a bit more of it.
I like the texture on the wall, and the sepia tones are a good choice for this image. It sets the mood well.
Technical and post processing:
Not much to say here. Technically it all seems well in order. You didn't go overboard in post processing, which adds to the nonstalgic feel to the image. Personally I would choose either a black or white border. Having them both there does not add anyting.
Meeting the challenge:
Well, it's a shadow, so nothing to say here.
How to raise your score:
There isn't much of a wow factor in this image. Although it's technically all fine, there isn't anything that makes you come back to this photo to have another look. I realise that's the whole idea, but it doesn't make the voters of DPC give you a high score.
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| 06/22/2006 12:00:11 PM | Street Laneby nhalizaComment: Everything is sharp in this picture. Not much bokeh going on. Image is also too small, so can't really comment on the rest of the photo. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/22/2006 11:59:10 AM | | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/22/2006 11:58:32 AM | Friendshipby btuckComment: Nice, although a bit too much contrast for my liking. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/22/2006 11:57:47 AM | Silver spoonletby levyj413Comment: I'm sorry, but this is not a very good rendition of the well known technique. You might want to add a few more drops and the flash distracts from the shot. The spoon reflections in the drops are not very clear and the colors are boring. This would be better if you had a colored backdrop to put the spoon on, and if you took the photo with a longer exposure in stead of flash. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/21/2006 11:38:17 AM | | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 06/21/2006 11:25:28 AM | Simplicity Rose Budby skulinsComment: I'm sorry, but the quality of this picture is just abysmal. You used only half of the allowed file size! |
| 06/20/2006 12:32:39 PM | | Photographer found comment helpful. |
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