Hannah Staring
by Jewelly

Comment:
Lovely eyes..
the white is a little overblown..
I detected a little photoshop here..
cause the hair is really sticking out at the back..
and the white background is a little patchy..
Do you have the original photo to work with?

Put it up in a thread for suggestions or you can send it to me to take a stab at..

You'll be amazed by what you'll learn
cheers
ps.. I really love her eyes..

Pavilion
by faidoi

Comment:
Lovely IR shot... Good control of exposure.. :) and I love the composition.. You should sell it for postcards.. :)

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by faidoi

Comment:
Perfect.. I love the expression.. cute girl too!

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by faidoi

Comment:
Lovely.. and impactful..
I love this one..
You might want to clone out the string.. :)

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by faidoi

Comment:
Nicely done.. Only improvement.. the black spot at the lower left.. you might want to have it removed.. :)

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by faidoi

Comment:
try a tighter crop .. let the edge eat into the kite..
You've got a very rich coloured kite against a foggy sky.. so.. lose the sky and let the kite do the talking..

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by faidoi

Comment:
Good take.. the tail is a little distracting.. but I guess it's alright in this case..

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by faidoi

Comment:
Would like to see more of the tail of the kite.. try a 4"x6" portrait composition?

Lovely shot..

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by faidoi

Comment:
This is a really good shot.. the composition and lighting is good and the photo does tells a story.. Nicely done..

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by faidoi

Comment:
Nice.. and good effort on getting the cage properly framed..:) good capture..