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Home made chocolate dough delight
Home made chocolate dough delight
hajeka


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Challenge: Desserts (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2012
Camera: Canon EOS-7D
Lens: Canon EF-S 60mm f/2.8 Macro USM
Location: At home
Date: Jul 16, 2012
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Jul 16, 2012

Fresh fruit in chocolate dough with some jelly and whipped cream. A lot of work to make, but it was delicious.

Statistics
Place: 10 out of 51
Avg (all users): 6.3729
Avg (commenters): 7.6000
Avg (participants): 6.2813
Avg (non-participants): 6.4070
Views since voting: 795
Views during voting: 241
Votes: 118
Comments: 21
Favorites: 0


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09/01/2012 10:32:30 AM
OMG - Fantastic
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08/25/2012 11:22:17 PM
Oh, goodness, this is wonderful! I want to eat it right now! Yum!
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08/19/2012 12:14:18 PM
Lovely to look at; must have been lovely to taste.
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08/18/2012 05:12:52 AM
Nice dof, you do know how to live !
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07/26/2012 07:36:40 AM
I'd been watching you practice desserts during the blurry SC. Congratulations on the top ten, this is great Henk!
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07/25/2012 09:57:21 AM
Those look so delicious.
Congrats Henk on the TT.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/24/2012 09:30:00 PM
Tart heaven. Well done close up.
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07/24/2012 02:19:04 PM
07/24/2012 01:29:12 PM
Great use of repeating elements to fill your frame with goodness.
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07/24/2012 09:20:16 AM
One in my top ten.
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07/22/2012 03:59:08 AM
Gorgeous!
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07/21/2012 10:04:48 PM
good stuff. Some of my more favored framing in the challenge
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07/20/2012 08:38:55 PM
I rank this one near the top. I like how the different types of fruit and chocolate form layers and stripes of different colors that lead the eye diagonally across the image.
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07/20/2012 02:31:07 PM
Great shot, focal plane and DOF very well placed.
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07/20/2012 11:45:01 AM
Interesting crop, good focal distance, and good color.
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07/20/2012 09:26:26 AM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

Colorful, sweet and delicious - I really enjoy the close-up view you give us of this dessert. The red of the rasberry really pops vibrantly and draws the eye in instantly. You have captured great details on the red berry and the chocolate 'cups' that hold the cream and fruit. The foreground in the front is nicely focused for details and then the eye travels back to see all the sweet treats in the background horizon - making it appear that the promise of sweet delights is vast and unending:-) My only critique is that it may increase the visual appeal a bit more if just a little more of the fruits were in sharp focus before it falls off into bokeh. Not too much though; just from the rasberry and the two blueberries behind it.
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07/20/2012 08:37:22 AM
This is definitely a different looking desert for sure. nice texture on the berry up front. the composition is ok but think i would like to see a different angle as well before deciding if i wanted to try this dessert.
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07/20/2012 06:36:47 AM
This is a tough challenge to vote. I'm torn between "what are you trying to do here" and "what do I expect here". Further complicating matters is the question "what would I do here".

What I would expect would be a technically strong piece of eye-candy that would present the dessert in a way that I would want to at least sample it, if not order it. Along these lines I'm looking at technicals: backgrounds, distracting elements, exposure, sharpness. I'm also looking for creativity, imagination, and originality, which can make up for less than perfect technicals.

So, where does this leave me with your image?

One of the best! Excellent composition, exposure, and color palette. Great details in the shadows. Luscious! I'll take a carton, please!!
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07/19/2012 03:51:30 PM
At first I thought that kiwi slice was a pickle. LOL! Vision check in aisle 10. Looks yum!
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07/19/2012 12:53:28 PM
Not sure what to do with this one... but a couple of things come to mind:

First, It would have been nice to cut down the highlights. Looks like maybe a window highlight on one side but a brighter spot on the other? Maybe finding a way of making the light source on the right not so harsh?

Also, for how much I love raspberries (and I really love raspberries!!) the hairs on the raspberries make it a little less appealing. (and I'm surprised by that. strange, but true.)

I like the dof. I'm curious what it would have looked like from a slightly lower pov.

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07/18/2012 02:25:56 AM
nice coloursand focus point
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