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01/13/2003 06:38:12 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
I look at this photo and see a lot of potential. People didn't seem to get this. I think the reason why is that you can't really tell where this is happening. Is it in the bird's cage? Is it on a roof? I honestly can't tell. Either move the shot or location to make it clearer. Also showing a small bird next to a huge tv screen would have worked too.
With the exception of the bird the colors are very bland. I'm not sure what else you could do except move this into a studio with better lighting.
It may be my lack of photography experience so please forgive me for not giving a more detailed critique. I personally would have a shot with more of the television. If you have any questions please feel free to e-mail me. |
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01/12/2003 05:11:27 PM |
| excellent color in this image... I'm not sure I really understand the concept, but i like it none-the-less... good work :) - setzler |
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01/10/2003 06:50:07 PM |
| The bird is beautiful, unfortunately the father tail is not complete, which is like cutting off feet from a person. This IMHO negatively affects the composition. Your negative space is not pleasing. If this is your bird, you have a great chance of shooting very atractive photos. Look for the birds eyes, and find the correct background. |
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01/08/2003 11:04:22 PM |
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01/08/2003 01:26:16 PM |
| Really neat bird shot, very colorful. I had been hoping for more out of this world strange from this challenge, but I will grant you this is a little strange. It's a very cool bird, lots of credit for it. 7 Swash |
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01/07/2003 07:40:33 PM |
| What is the bird pecking on?? |
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01/07/2003 01:18:57 PM |
| Would be good to see all of bird's tail. |
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01/06/2003 04:56:17 PM |
| brilliant colors, great capture. Did you crop out the end of the tail or did it get cut off? |
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01/06/2003 09:59:25 AM |
| Awesome bird anywhere. He can come to my house anytime, there's no stranger place. This is an awesome photo. Beautiful colors, wonderful focus, great cropping. A 10 all the way. PTL |
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