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01/14/2003 01:19:25 PM |
Arnit, greatings from the Critique Club! I did not vote on any of these images in this challenge and have not read any comments. So this is my first time seeing this and wow, this is a nice image. There are only a few comments I can make, and they will be small comments for sure. I might open up the DOF a little bit more. Even though I can read digital world, I would like it a bit sharper. I think if the type were sharp and the film canister blurry the symbolism might have been more impactful, especially if the canister were further back in the frame.
The shadows along with the blurred type in the image are turning blue. I took it into photoshop to verify that it wasn't my monitor and it is blue heavy. It has the chromatic abbrasion feel to it. Easily enough fixed though.
I wish I could supply you with better feedback, but I really like the image. The blown out background is nicely done. The idea is powerful. The green and red in the cannister stand out nicely. Great image...
If you have any questions or comments for me, just email...
Dave Nitsche
Message edited by author 2003-01-14 13:21:18. |
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01/12/2003 05:15:45 PM |
| I like this shot quite a bit, but I think you need a tad more depth of field to bring the first part of the word 'digital' into focus. I think that would have made this stronger and kept the film canister out of focus as well... nice work :) - setzler |
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01/12/2003 02:52:53 PM |
| realy nice! maybe the focus should be more to the front of \"d\" digital. nice |
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01/10/2003 10:07:00 PM |
Very well done. Clean shot - love the use of shallow dof
Ruthann 8 |
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01/08/2003 09:57:05 PM |
| i like the idea but it needs some kind of wow. |
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01/08/2003 03:06:39 PM |
| Very nice photo, I like your use of narrow DOF. Honestly, I had hoped for more out of this world type strangeness, but this is very well done. 8 Swash |
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01/08/2003 10:17:57 AM |
| great idea, I'm still debating whether I like the shallow depth of field or not, am looking forward to seeing what you have to say about your work. |
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01/08/2003 01:47:23 AM |
| I see your concept behind this. Very clever indeed. Nice and simple image. I like the composition and dof. Nicely done. |
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01/07/2003 08:43:59 PM |
| intersting use of depth of field; I think I'd like to see the whole world digital in focus. |
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01/07/2003 07:43:11 PM |
| Good for a photography site to meet the challenge. |
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01/07/2003 02:50:11 AM |
| Good idea. Just a thought...... it would have been funny to have someone trying to fit the film into the card slot of the digital camera. The D being out of focus is distracting to me but I like it anyway. |
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01/06/2003 09:40:59 PM |
| Great imagination for this simple yet effective shot. I love it when shallow DOF is used properly as in this shot (if only the DIG was also in focus I would've given you a 9). Your WB is very good too. 8 |
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01/06/2003 02:29:33 PM |
| Very well done. Good creative shot. |
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01/06/2003 10:57:37 AM |
| Great fantastic idea. But all of it needs to be in sharp focus. The roll of film is what is in the strange land of digital, therefor it is what need to be in focus. With the way you have it it appears, to me anyway, that digital is strange and the world is the roll of film. Think about it a minute. I could be wrong. But I really do love the unique idea. Your idea is a 10, the photo quality is only a 4 at the most, more like a 3. That would be an average of 6 - 7, which is actually more than the photo itself should get on it's merits. But this is just how I see it. Has good potential with just a little change. PTL. Could be a 10 overall. |
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01/06/2003 10:25:26 AM |
| beautiful ad quality shot. the dof works well and there will be many who criticize it but they honestly dont know what they're talking about :) |
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