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01/24/2003 01:01:55 PM |
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) The composition of the photograph has followed all of the tried and true rules of composition - especially the rule of thirds. The colors are bright and vivid and give the photograph a life of its own.
(2) BACKGROUND I am thinking that the background here is the sky and the hill top. The sky is a very nice color that compliments the tourquoise water and the red of the lighthouse. Unfortunately the hilltop is rather cluttered with trees, and except for the lighthouse, has no place for the viewers eye to stop. Once the viewer has seen the lighthouse, his eye tends to wander through the photograph.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Exposure seems right on the mark. Composition is good but unimaginative.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL I am thinking that a closer crop would have brought the lighthouse closer and made it more of the subject of the photograph rather than just another piece of it.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does a very good job of meeting the challenge.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is very interesting. I think perhaps this is a photo that you might try to reshoot. This is a great location to get some really neat shots. I would try different times of the day and different angles as well. |
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01/19/2003 06:43:52 PM |
| very good colors!! love the lighthouse |
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01/19/2003 06:28:49 PM |
| Nice colours. Too bad we can't see all of the light house though. Love the colour of the water. Alot better than the brown water around here :) Good job. |
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01/17/2003 07:11:14 PM |
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01/17/2003 01:17:17 PM |
| I love this. I love the turquise water and salmon colored lighthouse. |
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01/17/2003 06:27:09 AM |
| Really nice, colors are great. Seems like it could have been just a bit sharper though. |
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01/16/2003 09:39:50 PM |
| Looks like a post card! Very Nice. |
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01/15/2003 05:05:34 PM |
And just off to the right you have a scenic view of Dubois park. Intresting thing here is this lighthouse was owned by Johnson and Johnson. This is a wonderful inlet. The beaches are wonderful there. Miss it alot but will be moving back to Stuart any day now. You took this from the bridge on US1. I think they have a fish walk under the bridge. Might have provided for a better picture. Nice shot.
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01/15/2003 01:50:11 PM |
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01/15/2003 08:38:36 AM |
| Nice photo. Meets the challenge. Lighting is great. Could stand just a bit of sharpening. 7 waltoml. |
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01/15/2003 07:19:33 AM |
| The lighthouse offers a nice constrast of colour here. |
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01/15/2003 07:04:01 AM |
| nice choice of subjects and great color. |
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01/14/2003 02:13:55 PM |
| fantastic .. i feel like 9 |
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01/14/2003 11:54:15 AM |
| Landscape-inland scenery? |
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01/14/2003 09:10:26 AM |
| This lighthouse really needs to be the focal point of the picture. Some of the water can go. I promise I won't miss it. I think that a tighter crop would do this pic a lot of good. As for challenge relevance, that might hinder that a little. If it were me, I'd take my chances with a tighter crop - Inspzil |
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01/13/2003 07:06:44 PM |
| Cool. But it looks like a lighthouse, not Jupiter. :) |
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01/13/2003 03:32:59 PM |
| Wow, I love these colors! |
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01/13/2003 03:02:16 PM |
| Wonderful colors - really great photo! |
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01/13/2003 12:48:13 AM |
| Pretty shot, the house on the right distracts me just a bit if I was to be picky. Good luck in the challenge! |
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