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10/16/2004 01:08:25 PM |
Choosing to photograph only a portion of the phone means to me that you're thinking about your subject. But it seems that the composition is lacking in interest. You've used shallow depth of field, but it's not helping to point me to what must have been interesting to you. There's also a reddish cast to this....perhaps accentuating the contrast betwen the black phone and it's surrounding white would give this more graphic impact. |
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10/13/2004 09:14:23 AM |
Interesting angle, but lacks punch for me. I'd boost the contrast, but then I've been known to overcontrast, so what do I know? :) I don't like the logo being on there, but that's minor. 5 |
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10/13/2004 03:45:09 AM |
Your white balance seems a little off too me, and the lighting slightly harsh, especially in the upper right and on the buttons there. It's an OK shot of a phone, and definitely conveys communication, but remains just a little uninteresting. |
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