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Challenge: Aftermath (Advanced Editing VII)
Location: Backyard in Wisconsin
Date: Oct 17, 2014
Aperture: 1.2
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/6400
Date Uploaded: Oct 17, 2014

Overcast Day, No shadows to deal with :-). This picture turned out due to my procrastination on getting the rake.

Statistics
Place: 48 out of 61
Avg (all users): 4.9540
Avg (commenters): 6.2000
Avg (participants): 4.5667
Avg (non-participants): 5.1579
Views since voting: 309
Views during voting: 190
Votes: 87
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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12/11/2015 10:10:29 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First rule of DPC. Read the rules. Second and all subsequent rules of DPC: See first rule. It is very, very, VERY important to read and understand not only the ruleset for challenges, which tell you what you can't do, and more importantly....what you CAN do. Like go to 1200 pixels on the longest side. More importantly you failed to follow a very simple rule which was clearly outlined in the challenge description, and did not title your image 'Aftermath' as instructed.

The photo itself is only OK. I keep going back looking at it to see something that grabs my eye and draws me in, but there's nothing there in terms of composition to act as a focal point and start telling a story. The horizon is level and the colours are nice but so little is in focus, and so little of what is in focus to be seen, that it's all too easy to give this pic a low score and move on to the next one.

So, to submit a somewhat drab photo that could easily have been 1/3 bigger and to ignore that extra rule requiring you to title it appropriately, has resulted in a very top-heavy histogram.

Moral of this story: read the rules. Then follow them. And if there is ever a little yellow flag next to a challenge descrip, it behooves you to go and read up and learn why that flag is there, and follow whatever special instructions are indicated.

Sorry to come down a little hard on you, but that's just the way it is here. Feel free to PM me with any questions.

Susan
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/27/2014 04:39:17 PM
Beautiful tilt shifted presentation.
10/27/2014 02:34:47 PM
Might have worked for the shallow DOF one as well. Simple and clean, and good color tones.
10/24/2014 12:43:19 AM
7 from me. I wish you'd just titled this "Aftermath" as the description requires... but it has not affected my vote.
10/23/2014 12:12:56 AM
Title was supposed to BE "Aftermath" :-(
10/22/2014 04:20:15 AM
I would have rated this a lot higher had front leaves been in focus


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