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11/10/2015 07:47:52 PM |
Greetings from Andi at the Critique Club (only a year late).
I like this image, it's vibrant, has good movement and well composed, especially so as it was originally shot for a Candid. Challenge. As  bvy said the lines work really well here. I'm happy with the composition although the big issue is that you didn't straighten the horizon.
In an ideal world the girls right hand would be the one pointing upward and her right out - that would show her face and add another dynamic to the image.
I did say I like the composition but feel if you had a lower vantage point it would enhance the shot and separate her head from the horizon. The dof, sharpness and light is spot on for me.
It's a fun image and makes me smile (and, I should get the OH a pair of those wellies).
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11/07/2014 11:44:27 PM |
| Love the S-curve started by kite and completed by child... |
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11/05/2014 09:53:07 PM |
| I like the energy of this, but I would have cropped a lot off the top and the bottom since those parts aren't really adding anything. The horizon looks a bit crooked as well. |
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