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02/08/2003 11:34:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Interesting take and certainly meets the challenge, surprised this didn't score a bit higher.
Composition/ Content
I am a big fan of Black and White but wonder if this wouldn't have scored better with a sepia or even light color. Quite ingenious in my mind to form the word "square". Good use of the panorama shot and the word isn't dead center which I think adds to the shot.
Background
None really to speak of.
Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems good but maybe not really sharp.
Digital Processing - Technical
Good cropping on the word. Once again, I think I would really like to see what this looks like in Sepia.
Fits The Challenge
Definitely fits the challenge well.
My Opinion On The Photo
I originally scored this shot a six. It amazes me how evenly spread your votes were. From top to bottom it is almost perfectly even. I think you had a really good idea but it did't have quite enough "wow" factor to really score high. Good job and keep up the good work!
I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz
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02/01/2003 09:06:45 AM |
| Nice idea!! Photo is pretty flat without much WOW factor, but I gotta admit it was a hell of an idea. I never woulda thunk it. Good luck - Inspzil |
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02/01/2003 03:51:49 AM |
| you should've reagranged the bottom line too, 5 |
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01/31/2003 02:11:50 PM |
| I love the way you made the keys say square. The shadows in this picture give the keys deminsion. |
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01/30/2003 08:45:39 PM |
| Didn't see it at first; thought it might be another boring keyboard shot. I hope people took time to examine it closely. Very clever. Jacko 8 |
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01/30/2003 04:46:29 PM |
| Nice idea. I really like the black and white coloring that adds a little bit more to the photograph and makes it look sort of classy. Good job. |
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01/30/2003 12:36:32 AM |
| OK, how did you do this? Surely you didn't remove the keys and reset them on the keyboard! I was a little surprised that there wasn't a Admin note on this one. Good job, I hope everyone notices the word in the middle! |
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01/29/2003 10:40:11 PM |
| That's an aweful lot of work for this photo. And your focus and lighting are still good. Did pretty good at not getting shadows. Of course the cropping is perfect. I've seen a lot using letters, computer keys, etc. but this is one of a kind. You deserve a good score just for the uniqueness. I'll gladly give it a 7 |
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01/29/2003 08:53:40 PM |
| very creative. white and blacks look good. |
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01/29/2003 02:50:00 PM |
Nice trick.
This is an ingenius keyboard shot. |
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01/29/2003 11:45:33 AM |
| refreshing use of a keyboard..great in grayscale and well taken. |
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01/28/2003 12:15:03 PM |
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01/28/2003 02:08:25 AM |
| I like this the best, using this idea! Good luck in the challenge! |
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01/27/2003 09:05:20 PM |
| I bet someone was pissed after whis little project. |
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01/27/2003 06:40:44 PM |
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01/27/2003 05:44:08 PM |
| Hope you change the keys back before you upset someone!! Neat take on this idea!! |
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