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In Search of Square One!
In Search of Square One!
vtruan


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Square (Classic Editing)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 990
Location: Parkview Hospital, pueblo, Colorado
Date: Jan 18, 2003
Aperture: 2.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 60
Galleries: Family, Snapshot
Date Uploaded: Jan 25, 2003

 Son playing on floor of hospital room where my new son was born. 18 Jan 03

Statistics
Place: 174 out of 179
Avg (all users): 3.7606
Avg (commenters): 4.6667
Avg (participants): 3.7404
Avg (non-participants): 3.7857
Views since voting: 1177
Votes: 188
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 02/06/2003 10:56:17 PM
...from Critique Club...

Hi Van

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Very snapshot looking.

COMPOSITION:
Very good. Subject placing is good, the only thing I would so is move to the left so that the tiles align with the bottom border (horizontal) :)

TECHNICAL:
I think your low votes came from your technical execution. As soon as you use a onboard flash, you are doomed! This will almost always make it look like a casual snapshot. I suggest you use other lighting (mounted lamp, window, sun) to make your shots more dramatic. Looking at your other photos, I think this was a last minute thing and it's more about the story behind it than the actual photo :|

ARTISTIC:
N/C :)

OVERALL:
I know you can do better...you have done better...CONGRATS ON THE NEW MEMBER OF THE FAMILY!!!!!!!!

Cheers and good luck in the future challenges.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 02/03/2003 03:55:59 PM
Cute shot, however it looks like you were outside the date bounderies; the picture must be taken during the week of the challenge.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/01/2003 02:02:01 PM
Cute kid. What is all over his fingers that is red? Indirect light would have lighten the background without washing it out. Still not bad at all.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 01/29/2003 08:10:38 PM
I see the squares on the floor, but the subject of the photo is not a square (unless that's what you're implying). Basically, this is a snapshot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 01/28/2003 02:31:35 AM
I like your idea here! Quite original! Did he find the square yet?


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