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09/07/2015 06:19:35 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A very appealing image that meets the challenge well.
I agree with your commenters it is indeed a hauntingly beautiful image and it is made so specifically because of the inclusion of the person because to me his pose seems to suggest a certain sorrow at the loss of the tree. Your composition is perfect with the tree on the left and lots of negative space although I personally find the bird so small it is a bit of a distraction it should either be larger or not there at all. There's nothing you could have done in that respect but to have a larger bird flying towards it from the right together with the everything as it is would have been the icing on the cake.
Your exposure is good with good detail throughout, I do like the near silhouettes a lot. To be honest there's nothing else I can comment on I like it a lot, well done Romil |
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09/07/2015 12:19:34 AM |
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09/06/2015 10:46:00 PM |
Love the spaces, colors....looks like some of the alternative raku pieces I pulled from my kiln today.....satisfying. |
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09/06/2015 04:00:13 PM |
Nice silhouette and perfect simplicity |
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09/06/2015 08:50:28 AM |
This is great--I like the bird flying overhead too, to break up the negative space. |
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09/01/2015 04:33:05 AM |
beautiful and emotional. In my top five. |
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