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11/23/2015 05:55:17 PM |
Hello from the Critique club
An appealing image that meets the challenge well
A lovely image Marcel, the way the light is highlighting the centre of the leaf works well against the darker background. I like the smaller leaf and its colours and shadows against the larger leaf it works very well to distinguish it. I generally like the composition, though, unlike your commenter I would be inclined to crop some off the bottom right at the point where the bottom of the stalk's step joins the left side of the image, I find the gap below it too distracting for the overall result. The other thing is that the top left of the large leaf is losing a little sharpness and given the nature of the subject it is really desirable to retain the sharpness throughout the leaf.
Well done for spotting the potential here a very good attempt. |
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11/21/2015 07:56:03 PM |
| A gorgeous light in this image. |
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11/17/2015 09:09:32 PM |
| Would prefer a bit more space abov the leaf. |
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