DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Challenge Entries
Portfolio Images
Running Art
Running Art
Phocal


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Centered Composition V (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Challenge Stuff
Camera: Olympus OM-D E-M1
Lens: Olympus 17mm f2.8 M.Zuiko Digital
Location: Houston, Texas, USA
Date: Mar 8, 2016
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/8
Galleries: Abstract, Street
Date Uploaded: Mar 8, 2016

Went back to the same location as my recent ribbon winner in the February free study. Had my friend walk past the art but a guy with his son walked past and I liked what I got from them a bit better. Yes, there are actually two people there side by side, if you zoom in you can see the sons head lower on the mans body.

This time I did a more centered composition and kept the photograph in my cameras native 4/3 ratio (other entry I cropped to 3:2).



Wonder if my previous shot being on the front page is going to effect my score on this one.

Statistics
Place: 31 out of 80
Avg (all users): 5.5926
Avg (commenters): 5.8750
Avg (participants): 5.3784
Avg (non-participants): 5.7727
Views since voting: 411
Views during voting: 162
Votes: 81
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)


Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
03/17/2016 12:46:28 AM
I think what I would've said has already been said and they're probably the boxes you should of ticked.

I think the original was much better also.
03/16/2016 04:25:45 PM
Hello from the Critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge well.

You were right to ask the question and I think your score and comments have answered it for you! Whilst I adored your original and I still regard this image as excellent per se, it really doesn't do it any favours to so closely replicate the original even if it was so successful. I think you needed to distinguish from it predecessor to make it another original. Given the challenge brief in my mind I see this in portrait orientation with just the one red diamond or three at most with the camera on the floor making dynamic focused use of the centred tile line. Or alternatively zoomed in on those gorgeous reflections but then you're starting to lose the challenge theme.

Nice to see this gorgeous image again but not so soon. Thanks for your entry Ronnie
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/15/2016 10:40:10 PM
not a fan of reruns
03/15/2016 07:35:33 PM
nice image unfortunately just had an almost identical image in the free study and some folks will vote you down for that, the floor seam makes a nice leading line into the image.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/15/2016 01:57:46 PM
Didn't we see this?!
03/15/2016 11:05:44 AM
Love this, but wasn't it used before?
03/15/2016 10:29:14 AM
As much I loved the image the first time and gave you a 10, I cannot give you as high this time...The wow effect is gone and feels like milking the cow twice. The first one with the walking position was also more relaxing to look at. Let's say -2 for the deja vu, -2 for the overall image. A 6 from me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/14/2016 01:27:21 PM
Cool composition.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/12/2016 06:42:21 PM
I would love to know how this was created.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/09/2016 03:41:33 PM
Just saw this in the Free Study. Nice shot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2021 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Proudly hosted by Sargasso Networks. Current Server Time: 08/04/2021 04:49:52 AM EDT.