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'Oh I wish'
'Oh I wish'
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Before and After (Classic Editing)
Camera: Kodak DX3900
Location: bedroom
Date: Feb 2, 2003
Galleries: Still Life, Macro
Date Uploaded: Feb 2, 2003

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02/08/2003 09:09:09 AM
You're Australian too! I can tell :).

This is colourful and on theme, but I think you should study composition a little more. It doesn't seem tight to me. The lines are a bit awkward, and the sloping ticket pulls the eyes out of the photo. The coins stablilise the composition a little, but not enough to make it pleasing to me. It's also a flat photo, taken from an angle directly above. There is no depth. Try some from a lower angle, and if you have control over aperture, use a wide one to get some shallow DOF. This helps with macro setups like this to tighten the composition and draw the viewer's eyes right to where your focus is.
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02/07/2003 10:17:37 AM
what is this background that you used? I think it is way too busy, and the cards and money/coins could be in sharper focus.
02/04/2003 10:34:25 PM
too bright in some parts and too dark in others... but damn I know thats not always easy... a wider angle rating on the bulb in the flood lamp might help
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/04/2003 03:56:56 PM
I wish too! nice job. Background is a little strange, color nice and contrasted with the subject mater. cool coinage!
02/03/2003 01:05:15 AM
great colors!
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