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02/08/2003 09:09:09 AM |
You're Australian too! I can tell :).
This is colourful and on theme, but I think you should study composition a little more. It doesn't seem tight to me. The lines are a bit awkward, and the sloping ticket pulls the eyes out of the photo. The coins stablilise the composition a little, but not enough to make it pleasing to me. It's also a flat photo, taken from an angle directly above. There is no depth. Try some from a lower angle, and if you have control over aperture, use a wide one to get some shallow DOF. This helps with macro setups like this to tighten the composition and draw the viewer's eyes right to where your focus is. |
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02/07/2003 10:17:37 AM |
| what is this background that you used? I think it is way too busy, and the cards and money/coins could be in sharper focus. |
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02/04/2003 10:34:25 PM |
| too bright in some parts and too dark in others... but damn I know thats not always easy... a wider angle rating on the bulb in the flood lamp might help |
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02/04/2003 03:56:56 PM |
| I wish too! nice job. Background is a little strange, color nice and contrasted with the subject mater. cool coinage! |
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02/03/2003 01:05:15 AM |
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