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02/15/2003 10:45:44 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
by Inspzil
Composition - My first impression is that this is a candid snapshot. The background is really cluttered and the light is probably coming out of a window near a table. The light is very nice and soft. If she wasn't hunched over her knees, her expression and the lighting provided would have made an outstanding portrait. Actually it is a very nice picture, but I don't really think its challenge material. That's just one person's opinion though. Where are the shoes she's tying? I guess we'll just have to take your word for it.
Technical - Not a badly taken photo aside from the arm that is probably moving to tie the shoes. Its nice and clear and properly lit. Exposure is good. Processing stuff really isn't too much of an issue
Overall - A nice snapshot, but not really challenge worthy stuff IMO. Actually not that far away from it though. The background is really a killer on this photo. Sorry I don't have too much to say about this. Honestly I think its not far away from being really good. - Inspzil |
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02/09/2003 11:58:38 PM |
| Wonderful skin tones. Nice big eyes. I know this was candid, but the background detracted from the face and hair and lighting. |
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02/08/2003 01:46:40 PM |
| cant really be candid if the subject is looking at you, cant it? |
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02/06/2003 02:33:54 PM |
| The colors of this photo are nice. The subject dosen't look too thrilled. |
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02/05/2003 07:06:08 PM |
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02/04/2003 07:50:06 PM |
| Um, I seem to be unable to actually see the "shoe tie". Pretty nice clear shot of a lovely young lady, but a very distracting background. And the title refers to something I can't see, so that kind of takes away from the experience for me. |
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02/04/2003 03:57:35 PM |
| ahhh yeah i can hear it now " COULD YOU PLEASE PUT THE CAMERA AWAY FOR A LITTLE WHILE?" hahaha |
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02/04/2003 03:42:03 PM |
| I'd like to see the next shot when she realises what you are doing :) |
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02/04/2003 12:48:56 PM |
Composition: I like the long composition. Possibly would have included the hands/feet.
Technical: Great focus and colour. Caught the mood well.
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Nice pic but lacking slightly in composition. 6 |
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02/04/2003 10:14:32 AM |
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02/04/2003 12:50:49 AM |
| she has that too-familiar-to-ever-be-cliché look that says: "can you help me tie my shoe?" neatest of the "candid" shots. |
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02/03/2003 02:46:18 PM |
| You included shoetie in the title, but you can't actually see her tying her shoes, plus this isn't exactly a candid as she is looking directly at the camera and obviously knows your there. I prolly wouldn't have used ths title. It bothers me that her hands are cut off at the wrists and the fact that your lighting is uneven, there must be a window somewhere to the left?! The colors are good, and I think the focus is good, but overall not a very interesting photo. |
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02/03/2003 01:49:14 PM |
| Nice picture, though it doesn't really look like 'candid' picture. |
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02/03/2003 12:21:47 PM |
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