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08/11/2017 02:28:35 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club! I am impressed by the amount of work you put into this shot, and how bummed out you may feel by its poor score.
Like the commenters, I see the landscape and am drawn in by it...I have to admit that your son, cute as he may be, is simply a distraction. After all look at that gorgeous scenery he is competing with! His body language seems to reflect that he just isn't interested in what's going on around him, so his disengagement comes across. The post work is nice but as you must realize by now, even the most painstaking amount of post won't help an image that is weak. For me personally, bleachy clouds - like those to the right of the pic - are another distraction t draw my eye away from the mountains.
Hope this has been useful, feel free to PM me
Susan |
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08/06/2017 02:55:08 PM |
This is a beautiful image. IMO it would be better without the child, the eye is drawn towards him and away from the gorgeous scenery. |
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08/01/2017 04:02:16 AM |
very nice landscape the boy gives it the scale it needs
vote 6 |
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