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12/02/2004 08:35:01 PM |
from the critique club:
A very warm and soothing image. A little earlier would have allowed more cold colors, but the image as it stands is a wonderful study of the orange red spectrum. Of course, a sunrise or sunsets needs the touch of the silhoutte and here is where many images fail to entice. In this case the shrubs are ideal because they present a single subject to compare against the lovely sky colors. When this foreground is too busy, the viewer is intent in identifying shapes.
Compositional wise it has the sun rising on the left and the shrubs framming it with a sweeping coolness across the the bottom and it is from this safe and comfortable darkness that we observe the sun.
You have addressed the problem in the conversion and this is something you need to solve because if you enter an image and then you notice the deteriotion of the image, go do whatever to fix it, otherwise it is best to withdraw it because voters will simply mark it down.
To conclude, your composition is above average and by maintaining this quality you will turn in some very attractive images.
Message edited by author 2004-12-02 20:36:54. |
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12/02/2004 03:51:33 PM |
Originally posted by SDW65:
Nice silhouette but a bit out of focus. This could have been a good photo it focus would have been on. I donĂ¢€™t know if you used a tripod or not but my guess is camera shake. Keep up the good work, this one was very close. |
Sorry mate, the original file is in focus it blurred out when i made the 150k file for the challenge. Thanks anyway. |
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11/28/2004 11:14:17 PM |
returning for comments;
Sunrise. nice silhouette. Bumping up to 6. |
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11/25/2004 05:20:53 PM |
| Nice - I prefer to think of it as a sunset :) |
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11/24/2004 05:52:19 PM |
| This picture is breathtakingly beautiful. |
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11/23/2004 12:36:50 AM |
Nice silhouette but a bit out of focus. This could have been a good photo it focus would have been on. I donĂ¢€™t know if you used a tripod or not but my guess is camera shake. Keep up the good work, this one was very close.
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11/22/2004 12:35:25 AM |
| Great sunrise capture, beautiful colours. |
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