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11/29/2004 03:17:40 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is an interesting shot. It meets the challenge without a doubt but there is something about it that both fasinates me and bothers me. It's well done, the composure, the clarity overall but there is touch of graininess that seems just a bit, a very little bit much. Also the negative space around the edge seems a bit much to me. While the subject is well centered and certainly draws your attention because it is brighter than the rest the large amount of border or black space ends up being a distraction to me.
The color of the white on the clock face seems a bit dark also and yes, my monitor is calibrated. I think if it was a more sharp contrast, brighter, popped out more it might have done a bit better.
I like this shot overall and hope this helps.
Deannda |
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11/27/2004 04:04:59 PM |
| Almost non-pnotographic in its quality. The overlap of the hour hand is intriguing. I like it, I like the bordering and presentation generally. Neat, and controlled. |
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11/26/2004 10:05:48 PM |
| Nice choice -- eight is my favorite. |
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11/26/2004 08:58:18 AM |
| That's good - very good. The more I look at it the more I like it! Good luck |
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11/25/2004 08:52:47 PM |
| I appreciate your attempt to show time passing |
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11/24/2004 06:29:44 AM |
| B&W works really well on this shot. Nice, simple composition and it makes you think about the shot more than the other clock images in this challenge. I like it. 8th hour...8! |
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11/22/2004 10:13:35 AM |
| A very common idea in this challenge, but I really like the execution of this one- appeals to my sense of symmetry ;) |
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