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03/01/2003 11:15:03 PM |
Critique Club Critique:
Composition: One thing that I see right off the bat is that this shot is crooked. Also the light near the left side is pretty distracting. The yellow blue contrast is what really makes this shot.
Technical: This lighting of this photo is just fine. A tripod would have helped this shot dramatically by putting it in focus and you could have used a longer shutter speed letting the light streaks cross the whole shot.
Overall: This would have been a great shot if it wasn't so out of focus. I think thats the main reason why this scored so low. |
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02/23/2003 07:24:24 PM |
| Could have been a great shot if you had used a tripod or something. The colour contrast between the blue sky and the yellow lighting is nice, though. |
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02/23/2003 12:54:03 PM |
| A tripod would have made this a super shot. |
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02/22/2003 01:35:52 PM |
| the golden gate bridge? Great long shutter. I would have liked the beidge to be straightened: a little rotate clockwise. |
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02/21/2003 10:14:56 PM |
| I like the blur of the lights and the people--it shows that this is an active, engaging place. I kind of wish the bridge itself was in focus, though. Your colors and composition work well together. |
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02/21/2003 11:15:17 AM |
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02/20/2003 08:27:58 AM |
| I would have liked this more if the bridge had been sharp and upright. |
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02/19/2003 04:06:15 PM |
| Nice capture of lighting, but I would prefer all elements to be "not blurry". |
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02/18/2003 04:33:00 PM |
| Great idea. Would be a lot better if the bridge and distant objects were in focus (must have been windy that day?) |
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02/18/2003 11:26:14 AM |
| Not a bad effort without a tripod |
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02/18/2003 08:22:39 AM |
| This photo would have been a lot better without those people on the right there. They have been captured in a blur because of the slow shutter speed which in my opinion distracts my eyes too much. You have caught some great colors there though. |
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02/18/2003 12:53:08 AM |
| put the cameara on the tripod so everything else other than the traffic will be in focus |
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02/17/2003 09:43:32 PM |
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02/17/2003 07:41:48 PM |
The "Yellow Gate Bridge...?" Hmmm...
This kind of shot definitely requires a tripod, I'm afraid. This would have been a cool shot had it been held steadily. |
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02/17/2003 12:46:59 PM |
| This would have been really good, but the camera shake really detracts. All of the stationary object should be sharp, but they're not. Use a tripod next time. |
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02/17/2003 05:50:17 AM |
| I'm sure I'm not the only one who comment on the blur here. |
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02/17/2003 03:24:39 AM |
| use a tripod next time, or if you did, don't accidentally kick it. |
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02/17/2003 01:43:58 AM |
| Terrible. You should have used a tripod. |
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