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we all live in a yellow lamborghini
we all live in a yellow lamborghini
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Challenge: Yellow Revisited (Basic Editing II)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 735
Location: montreal
Date: Dec 5, 2004
Date Uploaded: Dec 6, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 386 out of 393
Avg (all users): 3.5572
Avg (commenters): 3.3000
Avg (participants): 3.6233
Avg (non-participants): 3.4800
Views since voting: 571
Views during voting: 381
Votes: 271
Comments: 11
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12/14/2004 08:59:37 PM
Returning for comments:
It would have been better to have focused on the front wheel. An image like this requires a smaller aperture to aid the dof. However, it meets the challenge and the composiyion is nice. Bumping up.
12/14/2004 08:57:29 PM
Hey, how did you get my Lamborghini? I need it back! I don't think this is really working for me, the setup I mean. On the carpet with the drapes and table/chair leg on the left top side. You have great potential here but needs work.
12/14/2004 03:45:01 AM
out of focus? on carpet?
12/10/2004 08:54:24 AM
Composition: 3, Technical: 3, Appeal: 2, Challenge: 4, Overall Calculated Average Score: 3
12/09/2004 09:12:12 PM
If i had a sub... On to your pic...lots of issues to work on. Lighting: you need something morethan the direct flash from the camera. the front fender is over exposed and hte background shows, the light falls off on the carpet ....try a table with a tshirt or sheet, or posterboard works well. it can be curved up the back and be a 'floor 'and a wall. The car hood is very noisy. high iso setting (due to low light) will do this. Check out a program (free) called Neat Image. Lastly, the front wheel is not in focus. As light drops off you openteh aperture more (to a lower number) and that reduces DOF. So more light will allow a smaller aperture and more DOF...lighting: start there.
12/09/2004 02:27:18 PM
This looks out of focus.
12/09/2004 02:21:01 AM
Needs better focus. The light would have been better on top of the car.
12/08/2004 11:48:07 AM
I think the carpet and curtains are a bit distracting. Try it again on a large sheet of paper that goes under the model, then goes up the wall behind - but not folded.
12/08/2004 01:22:34 AM
not creative, out of focus and awful light.
12/08/2004 12:24:42 AM
hrmm...Your focus seems a bit off here. The lighting is a bit harsh on the front left quarter panel. Possibly a different background and some better lighting would have done you more justice such as in a parking lot with some other cars out of focus in the background.
12/08/2004 12:20:50 AM
nice model
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