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Drake


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Challenge: Deja Vu (Advanced Editing III)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D100
Location: Battle Creek, Michigan
Date: Dec 18, 2004
Aperture: F25
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/4 sec.
Galleries: Macro, Water
Date Uploaded: Dec 19, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 101 out of 106
Avg (all users): 4.8594
Avg (commenters): 4.3333
Avg (participants): 4.7391
Avg (non-participants): 4.9268
Views since voting: 836
Views during voting: 345
Votes: 192
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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01/02/2005 05:08:15 AM
Visually this image just isn't working. It appears disorganized, chaotic. There are some areas of nice, luminous color, But everything right of center and above the horizontal frond is just visual "lost space" with nothing good happening. It's not like you have negative space in a dance with positive space, it's like the image just peters out on its own.

Referring to the stunning original on which this is "based", all they have in common is that you have punned on his title, and I'm sure that worked against you.

I wish I had something more positive to say, but this just isn't working at any level for me.

Robt.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/23/2004 09:20:11 PM
nothing happening for me here; visual confusion is all
12/22/2004 10:47:29 AM
The composition doesn't work for me. Maybe the lighting needs a bit of adjustment.
12/20/2004 08:47:23 PM
I think you'll get bashed on this one, just for taking a radically different approach from most. A shame, but this shot actually doesn't have anything like the impact of JJ's shot, simply in terms of tonality and composition, if nothing else.


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