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03/09/2003 09:23:30 PM |
Critique Club
Composition=content
Composition is lovely here, perhaps a little too much like Shiizzams recent win, but works well. You have made a good statement here, but it could be taken as too general to really fit the topic of despair.
Technical
Focus appears to be on the material, adding a bit of softness to the eye area, perhaps this could be sharper. I think that the flash is a bit too bright for this kind of shot, perhaps some soft side lighting would have been good, lighting up the eye area, but de-emphasising the material.
My Opinion
I like the shot, it has a meassge and does make people think. The composition is great. |
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02/28/2003 08:24:18 AM |
| I think the green eye betray the model...but nice shot |
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02/28/2003 12:36:03 AM |
| exposure begs for natural lighting not flash. You think despair but what do you see? |
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02/26/2003 03:04:23 PM |
Dispair????????? But good use of lighting
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02/25/2003 08:22:40 PM |
| This would be total despair to me ! Well done |
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02/25/2003 01:55:46 AM |
| You make a good cultural statement here, I like your idea. Maybe it would have been a better shot with different lighting? It seems too bright to me. I feel some shadows in the eyes would have given a better effect? Only a suggestion. |
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02/24/2003 07:22:06 PM |
| This implies...that Islamic women are despairing? I don't think I understand. |
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02/24/2003 05:05:39 PM |
| Nicely done. I really like the idea, the composition, and the light. Nice. |
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