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03/13/2003 01:47:19 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This particular picture is real real close to being very good. The composition is pretty good. There is a little naturally occurring noise that I think takes away from the image considerably. I think the ring of bubbles and stuff over the top of the yolk and around that arc are very distracting. I think if you could remove those, you improve the composition substantially. There is also a small bunch of them on the bottom right of the yolk that would be better if removed. The ones in the white of the egg are a bit distorted and don't look so much like grains of sand. I think they can stay and not be too distracting. The angle and the macro effect really make this picture.
Technical - I think this picture, well focused would've done much better. The image is just a little bit short of sharp. It may be just one more "sharpen" away from that actually. The exposure could've been just a little more too to really bring out the yellow of the yolk. Its close. That may be possible to fix with PS as well.
Overall - A good concept for a picture. I think with a little honing this will be a really nice image. I think your pic was graded a little harshly probably due to the sharpness. I'd be lying if I didn't say that was a sticking point of mine too. Hope this could be a little helpful for you. Good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
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03/06/2003 07:41:45 PM |
| Wow! You captured this one well. Those two bubbles at the front give this shot so much impact! I would print this one. |
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03/06/2003 09:58:43 AM |
| Very cool photo, this "egg drop" capture. Great imagination, nicely captured. |
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03/04/2003 08:08:19 PM |
| i really like this - good colors |
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03/03/2003 11:40:49 PM |
| nice detail. I would like to see it a bit brighter. slight exposure compensation +0.3 may have brightened it a bit and still keep that "outer space" feel |
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03/03/2003 06:51:15 PM |
| excellent macro... i think just a bit more light would really set this in motion also... nice work :) - setzler |
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