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04/06/2005 09:51:26 AM |
got to this photo from "a bomb from nowhere " thread...
beautiful model and I would say a good pose, but the quality of the photo is not so good which is why you can see it didn't score well...You need a better lighting, the image looks like its underexposed and if you try to use levels/curves it will make it noisy as I can see here.. most likely you used not so bright light and camera was at a high ISO setting...also the white balance is a little off giving a yellow cast to the whole image.
this is my attempt at editing...
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04/05/2005 11:42:52 PM |
| Very nice model with lovely hair and nice facial expression. I would have done anything to close the f stop more and then bringing the hand closer to the body would have focused on the stem of the apple. This would have sharpen the lovely eyes a little better. A very good effort. Bumping up. |
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04/05/2005 11:05:52 PM |
| Beautiful model but the background is a problem. Even a green solid color would be better than against a white wall. Cool concept and theologically the stuff of the human problem. .. Not woman, but human. |
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04/05/2005 11:20:59 AM |
| Other than the quality of the picture I think it is a nice shot in the series. |
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04/04/2005 03:26:02 PM |
| Nice idea for the challenge. Lighting is pretty good. I like the models facial expression and upturned eyes. I would have liked to see a bite taken out of the apple. Since according to the story, Adam and Eve didn't know they were naked until they ate of the fruit. |
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04/04/2005 03:30:39 AM |
| Difficult to do, nice try. |
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04/04/2005 02:43:59 AM |
| the plastic or silk artificial flowers seem to ruin it and the background white is too harsh |
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04/03/2005 07:02:27 PM |
| Hillarious. Focus is a little soft, but well done. |
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04/03/2005 04:19:16 PM |
| seems slightly out of focus.... |
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04/01/2005 11:02:18 PM |
| Doesn't seem quite sharp. I might try a darker background to set of the skin tones of the model. Nice Idea. |
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04/01/2005 08:53:23 PM |
| what is this??????? come on??? not good a 1 |
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03/31/2005 09:37:12 PM |
| great idea. I really like the colors, and the expression of your model. Not sure about the lighting and background though. 7. |
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03/31/2005 07:45:32 PM |
| Nice image, or at least nice idea. I know it would have been tough, but this might have been a winner if taken outside amongst some trees rather than in a studio setting. <6> |
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03/31/2005 11:25:19 AM |
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03/31/2005 10:11:30 AM |
my gf refused to do this... good job in getting the idea onto film (as such). Slight lack of sharpness detracts and it looks as though there is a bit of noise in the image generally. Maybe your ISO setting for a (presumably) indoor, curtains closed kind of shot. Consider applying a bit of sharpening to the pic (remember to do this last).
Compositionally, the apple might have been more interesting outside the centre of the frame. |
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03/31/2005 06:19:18 AM |
| Very good idea. The picture itself is kind of grainy and the lighting is sort of dull. |
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03/30/2005 09:03:11 PM |
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03/30/2005 07:23:48 PM |
| Hmmm! It might be my monitor or my tired eyes, but she seems out of focus. The shadow is a little distracting. |
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03/30/2005 05:09:24 PM |
| I thought she wasn't supposed to cover herself up until AFTER she ate the apple. |
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03/30/2005 07:47:15 AM |
| Beautiful model, but picture need to be sharper and color adjustment needed nd model is to stiff .. ir |
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03/30/2005 02:26:46 AM |
| should always take off your socks and watch |
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03/30/2005 02:25:27 AM |
| this model deserved a better light and focus set up!!! 10 for the model 2 for the idea 4 for the shot... 6 for the effort and as my vote ;) |
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03/30/2005 12:51:05 AM |
Nice title... I like the Eve concept...
The picture is a little mottled but I am giving High scores for a well done concept... |
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03/30/2005 12:28:59 AM |
| My idea too ck out forbiden fruit..... :) |
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03/30/2005 12:10:08 AM |
| Ah, the dreaded wall shadow. If you want to cure that, move the subject away from the wall a bit more and that should drop away. I like the picture though. |
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