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04/07/2003 12:39:59 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
You have filled the frame with the subject nicely. Also, I like the diagonal movement provided -- it is much more effective than a simple horizontal or vertical framing. Maybe just a touch more space at the top, or a tighter crop at the bottom would give it a more balanced feeling.
TECHNIQUE
Great focus and colors. I like that the cracks are so visible. Also the colored shadow is a great touch. I think that if there was even more of that, it would particularly effective.
OVERALL EFFECT
This is a great abstract. It is "out there" enough to gain the viewers interest and keep it, but not so wild that it totally confounds. The colors are very warm and inviting. I think this would look good on the wall of a modern apartment or townhouse, etc.
best to you in future challenges. karmat |
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04/06/2003 10:25:41 PM |
| very nice abstract work... the color here is excellent, as is the detail in the vase... nice work :) - setzler |
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04/06/2003 03:59:32 PM |
| wonderful lighting, good macro, good shoot, what else? GOOD WORK! |
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04/06/2003 10:58:03 AM |
| really different colors, good focus, really different. nice job |
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04/02/2003 06:05:55 PM |
| Pretty but I'd have cropped the upper 3rd removing the dark part and making it more abstract. MHO |
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03/31/2003 03:23:49 AM |
| Pretty. Crop out some of the white at the bottom - looks unbalanced. |
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